Friday, September 25, 2009

The Secret of Feeling Full Initial Mag Layout

I like this mag layout better than the How Safe? one because of the text orientation and circular imagery. I'm going to try and keep the text oriented to the bottom half of the layout in my final. The plate image is still a bit too dark so I'll have to lighten it up a bit so the text is more readable. And I'm not 100% sure about how I've put together the side-bar text. I still have to work that issue out as well.

1 comment:

  1. I like the decision on how to organize the text in the lower portion, but the big picture behind it doesn't work at all. How can you use this image? Get it out of the text. You have all that space on top for the graphics, use it wisely. Is that one of your Gilligan typefaces. Kill the funky typeface.